Oaklands Future School and uniform for oaklands 
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W.A.L.T persuade the reader to agree with you.We should have trampolines at school because it is very good for exercise.
I think the positives of having trampolines at oaklands school are...
1 you get very fit.
2 It is very fun.
3 You can have lots of friends to do it with you.
4it helps you learn more.
5it refreshes your brain.
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I think the negatives of having trampolines at oaklands school are...
1 safety people could fall out.
2 if too many people are on the bottom it could rip.
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How i think to fix the negatives fix the negatives...
1 only have 2 of 3 people on at a time.
2 don't do tricks only do it if you have permission.
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How to get the money
Have a PJ day gold coin donation.
Have a bake sale selling cakes for 1 of 2 dollars
And all of the school in christchurch get one million dollars to redesign their school E.G. halswell school.
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